The Hobbit Little white cover Draft

This is my first Little White Lies draft cover, I like the the shading for Gandalf’s skin tone but I think it needs more blending to make it look more realistic and to tidy it up. I will also have to reposition the pipe from Gandalf’s mouth so you can see the smoke rise from the bowl of the pipe to make it more understaing text in the smoke. I also think I need to redesign the eyes because at the moment I am not happy with them.