After presenting my pitch and receiving the feedback, I have understood what people would like to see and play in a game. Games that are short games with not much narrative to follow is much easier and fun to play as the player doesnt have to concentrate as hard aposed to if they were playing a game such as Grand Theft Auto with an in depth narravtive which is also fun but requires a lot more focus and time to play it.
The game also has to look very visually interesting using lots of eye cathing colours as well as looking very clean and sleek. The sound also is improtant in the game as it draws the player in which could help them get into the Flow. If the game was on a seires of platforms and devises such as playstation, xBox and phones and tablets, the game would reach a much wider audience.
from presenting this pitch to some of my fellow peers, I feel I have developed more skills when presenting an idea infront of other people.